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When the sun and the earth were in love, ever young
I was born on a full moon with silver clarity
I'm that woman who sleeps on olive groves
Who makes angels fall in love with men's daughters
And lets herself be tricked by your sweet spells
Who obeys the very impulse of her  heart
Do you know who I am, where I came from ?

I live where stars grow bigger on a light breeze
Where butterflies were once flowers
Where God blessed my garden in Eden with peace
There, where I lay on a cloud softer than foam

When the day splits into two halves, you see me
My steps are as light as those of a chamois
My hair running wild; wings of an evil crow
My mouth has the roundness of a precious ring
Cheeks, two fields of roses blooming again
Under my feet grow trees, and remain ever green
You need my palms, you seek my blood and fear
Before you crave for more, grant me what I wish for

Kiss the ground before me, show me your loyalty
Borrow the devil's wings, bring me bouquets of stars
I want that purple flower which grants happiness
Give me lands, as much as my eyes can see
I want Jewels, slaves and cattles of black horses
Let me bathe in milk and honey, soak my feet in wine

Leave me when the golden mornings touch my skin
When the smiling fields flood me with sunlight
When mountains are pearls around my neck
And those dew drops lay softly on my burning lips

Though I have all intentions of losing you
When you are busy solving the mystery of science
I'm learning about angels and humans in disguise
I keep you safe when the earth swallows creatures
I hide you in the shadow of my golden wings
And your every wound heals between my hands

Bound with you, before mornings and evenings
Before there were daybreaks and sunsets
Before we fell down, before guilt and regression
And if misfortune should knock on your door
Remember where I live, where once you left me
I will be the last land where you would wish to be
I will be the last face you would wish to see
:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
I love this poem :heart:
Imagination is all I got.





Let me know what you think about it.


Edit : 16-5-2012

My God :omg: I can't believe I got a DD . :happybounce::excited::w00t:
I really think the neighbors heard me screaming :giggle:
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:iconwolfberry-j:
Absolutely beautiful! I love the passionately mystical quality of this poem.
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
Thank you so much for reading and for your beautiful words :bow:
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:iconanachronoxian:
A voluptuous, flowing mythology that is both epic and personal. I love it.
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment:bow: So happy you enjoyed the poem :dalove:
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:iconnomadsage:
God, wow this is good.
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
Thank you so much for reading :bow:
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*FallingAsleepTonight Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Flows nicely, quality eastern imagery and feel to it, certainly deserves the DD :)
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
Thank you so much :bow: You honoured me :)
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:iconsarrain:
The title alone drew me in!!! As for the poem itself? STUNNING!!! ABSOLUTLEY STUNNING!!!
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:iconmrs-freestar-bul:
Thank you so much for reading :bow: Much appreciated:dalove:
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