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I am still a stranger in your battlefield
My rifle on my shoulder, I do not mean to fight
My tears cutting  the ground under  your feet
You stand over my bleeding body
Your cold blade dripping your way out

You stab me, once and twice, you grin at my wounds
My blood meets the thirsty salty soil
They greet, they hug, they mate under your feet
They give birth to the wild bloody roses
Where every wound blooms once more

I hear your walk away, leaving my barren land
I pray for death to push the arrow deeper in my back
To take the last hopeless breath, the last breeze of love
Bury me where the old moon was born
Let my head rest in a land of cinnamon and honey

When the white hands arrive with their remedy
Tell them all my birds left me and flew north
I do not wish to heal, I do not pray for cure
Battered and broken, my heart left the shore
How many people are left behind with broken hearts






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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
amazing...i read your poems...i was so very impressed...i will featured- with all my pleasure- your art- my  name is KAY
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
so much welcome !
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LauraChan3 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
with broken hearts and broken lives.
This poem is sad but lovely. I can seem to relate it to more than one life situation.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So happy you think so :no d: Thank you so much for reading:hug:
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SamiKitty14 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Very well written, amazing job ^.^ :iconpenguinclapplz:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading :bow:
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SamiKitty14 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
No problem ^.^ glad i did :icongladplz:
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abrakada-vermin Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this breaks my heart and mends it every time I read it.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much my dear for reading:hug: Happy you like it.
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Diluculi Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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Hi there!
You have been featured here: [link]
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So sweet of you dear :blowkiss:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great piece of work as always. Very touching.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading my dear :dalove:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime I enjoy reading your work.
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for making me think deeper and dream further :heart:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy I could do that my sweet Gabriela:hug: Be a big dreamer like me, Its fun:la:
Thank you so much for reading:bow:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're most welcome :icondaydreamplz: you're right, dreaming is fun :icondancinglaplz: it's the only kind of dope I approve of :frail:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:laughing: that is awesome :giggle:
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
It's seriously great Saida!!!:clap: Well done!:hug:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you my dear:hug: So happy you like it :huggle:
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Anytime friend!!!:huggle:
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Hidani96 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist
really touching!
I love it ...
:hug:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading my dear :hug: So happy you love it :dalove:
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Hidani96 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist
you're very welcome ^.^
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Xaviorzion Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great piece of work,
Touching.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading dear:bow: Happy you think so
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Xaviorzion Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)
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angelheart05 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow !! This is so beautiful :rose:
So sad, wish if your amazing words describe a better feeling
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Thank you for reading my dear:bow:
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angelheart05 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
My pleasure :)
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abrakada-vermin Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You play your words like an instrument, thank you for sharing this with us :)
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading :bow:
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Cazamelia Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sad but beautiful poem :)
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes sadness is pure beauty.
Thank you so much for reading:bow:
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KittyOmi Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing. <3
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading:bow:
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KittyOmi Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student General Artist
not at all(:
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm left speechless by this. It's absolutely amazing, and it really connects with the feeling of being heartbroken. These words connected with my heart in a very strong way, it was so cathartic to read this, and as usual, I'm awed by your beautiful way with words. I think my favorite line was "Let my head rest in a land of cinnamon and honey. " Just gorgeous imagery.

Time to read through this another five times or so. :heart:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ow my sweetie:hug: I'm so happy you loved this poem. I appreciate your opinion very highly always:bow:
Thank you so much for your support my dear:tighthug:
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callerofcrows Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Always! :huggle:
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LandNarwals Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it!
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much:bow:
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Professional
Stunning! "Your cold blade dripping your way out" is one very powerful line. Just love the way the line ending in "honey" runs into the line ending with "remedy"..poetically that is just perfect, it leaps and sings as you speak it. A really powerful piece from an astounding writer. :heart:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much my dear fro the beautiful comment. I'm honored, your opinion is always highly appreciated:bow:
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Professional
You are welcome :-)
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i-c-e-b-l-u-e Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
another powerful one! :clap::hug:
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So happy you like it:happybounce: my friend :tighthug:
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usagiofthestars Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful! I love when someone holds onto an idea, and carries it through from beginning to end. Such wonderful imagery! <3
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In all my poems you will find the same pattern. One idea, one theme and I work on it.
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment and for reading:bow:
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